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Pleasure
the full moon night
the cool breeze
the beach
the testimony of the moon
and the imagination of a beautiful face.
the cool breeze
the beach
the testimony of the moon
and the imagination of a beautiful face.
Published 19th Apr 2023
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19th Apr 2023 5:01pm
Dear D,
Beautiful pictures ran through my mind with this write. I loved the images and the sensory experience you provide throughout. Lovely poem. H🌷
Beautiful pictures ran through my mind with this write. I loved the images and the sensory experience you provide throughout. Lovely poem. H🌷
19th Apr 2023 5:04pm
Hey
Honoria
I hope you well
Thanks much for visiting and commenting
Appreciate your feedback 💖
Honoria
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Thanks much for visiting and commenting
Appreciate your feedback 💖
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
19th Apr 2023 5:20pm
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19th Apr 2023 5:26pm
Aww
Hello dear
I agree with you 😊
N yaaa in the testimony of nature, under the warmth of the moon, the fun of doing natural work out is so special and much pleasant 😸
Hello dear
I agree with you 😊
N yaaa in the testimony of nature, under the warmth of the moon, the fun of doing natural work out is so special and much pleasant 😸
19th Apr 2023 8:48pm
sensitive and emotional ink
I enjoyed reading your sensitive poem
peace and love
MP
I enjoyed reading your sensitive poem
peace and love
MP
20th Apr 2023 2:48am
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21st Apr 2023 4:21am
21st Apr 2023 1:36pm
sunrise witch ties my eyes
along a song, from a bird landing on a branch
the scenery advance me into trance
the word began to dance
the flowers got up to walk
and finally the trees started to talk
along a song, from a bird landing on a branch
the scenery advance me into trance
the word began to dance
the flowers got up to walk
and finally the trees started to talk
21st Apr 2023 2:18pm
Hello Dear
You have presented very beautiful expressions related to our nature. I really liked that you carved such a beautiful vocabulary in my comment. Well thanks a lot for visiting me and reading my piece! 😊
You have presented very beautiful expressions related to our nature. I really liked that you carved such a beautiful vocabulary in my comment. Well thanks a lot for visiting me and reading my piece! 😊
22nd Apr 2023 11:28am
22nd Apr 2023 12:18pm
Awwww
Then it is definately a matter of pleasure for me that because of my writing your memories were refreshed. I'm really glad l. Enjoy 🙂
Then it is definately a matter of pleasure for me that because of my writing your memories were refreshed. I'm really glad l. Enjoy 🙂
23rd Apr 2023 8:33pm
Hi, "the testimony of the moon" is a unique and interesting phrase. I like it. Keep going.
24th Apr 2023 1:40am
Awwww 😊
Thank You so much for visiting my profile n for this lovely feedback. I appreciate your feedback.
Thank You so much for visiting my profile n for this lovely feedback. I appreciate your feedback.
