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The World is Different At Dawn
The world is different at dawn
Quieter, simpler
The world is calm at dawn
The birds wake at dawn and sing their warning song, of the bears that woke with the sun and trundle on
The mist rises at dawn
Dew from warming ground, from colored petals, from glowing leaves
It rises to the heavens where it waits before falling back to earth as the afternoon rain
Sunbeams are magical at dawn
They stream over the tips of the mountains, gathering the glow and grace of snowmelt waterfalls, the softness and strength of the evergreens, before streaming into the valley and illuminating my buttercups with the light of God
The world is simple at dawn, I can do anything at dawn
Grant me a cup of tea and a sweater and I will sing a morning song
Quieter, simpler
The world is calm at dawn
The birds wake at dawn and sing their warning song, of the bears that woke with the sun and trundle on
The mist rises at dawn
Dew from warming ground, from colored petals, from glowing leaves
It rises to the heavens where it waits before falling back to earth as the afternoon rain
Sunbeams are magical at dawn
They stream over the tips of the mountains, gathering the glow and grace of snowmelt waterfalls, the softness and strength of the evergreens, before streaming into the valley and illuminating my buttercups with the light of God
The world is simple at dawn, I can do anything at dawn
Grant me a cup of tea and a sweater and I will sing a morning song
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Re. The World is Different At Dawn
well i liked this
the dawn is when the birdsong csn be heard my favourite time
tea and sweater on rhe way lol
the dawn is when the birdsong csn be heard my favourite time
tea and sweater on rhe way lol
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15th Apr 2023 4:32am
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15th Apr 2023 4:23am
Dear CH,
I really enjoyed your poem. You set a very calming tenor throughout the piece that was so inviting and relaxed. The imagery was so tangible you could almost hear the birdsong and feel the heat from the teacup. Lovely write. Welcome to DU.
H🌷
I really enjoyed your poem. You set a very calming tenor throughout the piece that was so inviting and relaxed. The imagery was so tangible you could almost hear the birdsong and feel the heat from the teacup. Lovely write. Welcome to DU.
H🌷
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15th Apr 2023 4:35am
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15th Apr 2023 4:26am
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15th Apr 2023 4:36am
Absolutely. Put me in the right mood and I'm itching to write a poem about any time of day xD
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15th Apr 2023 4:37am
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15th Apr 2023 4:29am
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15th Apr 2023 9:39am
Wow, this is so beautiful n calming to the senses. A lovely tribute to dawn. 😊
Welcome to DUP 🌹
Welcome to DUP 🌹
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15th Apr 2023 5:19pm
Re. The World is Different At Dawn
15th Apr 2023 6:02pm
This is a beautiful ode to the first rays of sunlight. You have an honest, vulnerable voice to your writing that I am really drawn to. Welcome aboard!
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15th Apr 2023 7:45pm
A beautiful dawn. Brings a sigh of bliss. The way to start ones day with such feel good vibes.
Thank you for sharing Hannah. 😊
Thank you for sharing Hannah. 😊
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