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No great metaphor today,
or pithy line
as a nexus for
the expanding poem.
My mind is slipping,
being eroded
by the many things
that grind for attention,
and instead my
thoughts
wander.
In one ear
and out the other;
on automatic
while the soul pupates
because focus today
is expensive
but my daydreams are free
and a little too inviting.
or pithy line
as a nexus for
the expanding poem.
My mind is slipping,
being eroded
by the many things
that grind for attention,
and instead my
thoughts
wander.
In one ear
and out the other;
on automatic
while the soul pupates
because focus today
is expensive
but my daydreams are free
and a little too inviting.
Published 13th Apr 2023
| Edited 15th Apr 2023
Author's Note
Entry #13 for NaPoWriMo2023.
No poetry today please; we're not with it, whatever it is.
No poetry today please; we're not with it, whatever it is.
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13th Apr 2023 10:53pm
Are you fucking kidding? No poetry today?
The grunge era of poetry is alive in your write. Demi-nilhism... it doesn't matter but only right now, and it will again matter.
The narration was excellent.
This was AH-may-ZING.
"because focus today
is expensive
but my daydreams are free
and a little too inviting."
Placing a price on the daydream, and juxtaposing it with the reality was fucking delicious.
Great no-poem poem
The grunge era of poetry is alive in your write. Demi-nilhism... it doesn't matter but only right now, and it will again matter.
The narration was excellent.
This was AH-may-ZING.
"because focus today
is expensive
but my daydreams are free
and a little too inviting."
Placing a price on the daydream, and juxtaposing it with the reality was fucking delicious.
Great no-poem poem
