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RAIN'S TRICKLING SOUND
Wetness outside:
wetness inside
flows from divide
in thighs of bride.
Thunder's rumble
while we tumble
in a stumble,
and hands fumble.
Rain's trickling sound
is all around,
while bed we pound,
thigh in thigh ground.
wetness inside
flows from divide
in thighs of bride.
Thunder's rumble
while we tumble
in a stumble,
and hands fumble.
Rain's trickling sound
is all around,
while bed we pound,
thigh in thigh ground.
Published 8th Apr 2023
Author's Note
Inspired by Pinkdreams' "Rain" which was in turn inspired by videos like:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5rNc-gILBE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5rNc-gILBE
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Anonymous
8th Apr 2023 8:24am
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8th Apr 2023 9:03am
There was a somewhat superstitious belief that making love in thundery weather aided conception.
8th Apr 2023 9:22am
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