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reality
Human desires never diminish
many want houses on the moon
and many more people don't even
have their own houses on the earth too.
many want houses on the moon
and many more people don't even
have their own houses on the earth too.
Published 8th Apr 2023
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
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9th Apr 2023 12:37pm
8th Apr 2023 7:43pm
Hi Dimpy,
Enjoyed your concise little gem of a poem. It deals with a tough issue. Poverty in a sea of riches situation.
Enjoyed it.
Regards,
BITS
Enjoyed your concise little gem of a poem. It deals with a tough issue. Poverty in a sea of riches situation.
Enjoyed it.
Regards,
BITS
9th Apr 2023 12:38pm
9th Apr 2023 3:27pm
Well and truly said. An economic and impacting metaphor is something that is always admirable.
9th Apr 2023 3:34pm
