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When I Look at You
Girl , you have no idea
What I see when I look at you
I want to lick your naked body
Play Spin The Bottle
Females admire my confidence
but they never see me
when I'm Home alone
That's when I'm the most Fucking RAW
I stare at you when you’re not looking
Whenever I look at you
. I Fucking forget everything
Especially finishing
Writing this erotic poem
What I see when I look at you
I want to lick your naked body
Play Spin The Bottle
Females admire my confidence
but they never see me
when I'm Home alone
That's when I'm the most Fucking RAW
I stare at you when you’re not looking
Whenever I look at you
. I Fucking forget everything
Especially finishing
Writing this erotic poem
Published 6th Apr 2023
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6th Apr 2023 6:20am
6th Apr 2023 6:45am
6th Apr 2023 6:59am
Was the title inspired by Her's poem - which in the Erotic section comes immediately before yours? It reads like a reciprocation of what she said.
Love that drawing - a more realistic, less cosmetically enhanced figure in my view. Good change.
Love that drawing - a more realistic, less cosmetically enhanced figure in my view. Good change.
6th Apr 2023 7:09am
6th Apr 2023 1:06pm
7th Apr 2023 1:00am
Thanks her
God bless you girl
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People these days
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God bless you girl
Did you see Whitewidow comment?
People these days
😎😀😀👀😜
6th Apr 2023 11:31pm
Not very original I'd have to say
A piece very similar nearly identical was written by DUP very original poet HER
Using her concept and thought has taken away from you're work
Try again with originality
A piece very similar nearly identical was written by DUP very original poet HER
Using her concept and thought has taken away from you're work
Try again with originality
7th Apr 2023 00:58am
Being curious can get you into trouble
Whitewidow
Please is time to hit the pillow
Whitewidow
Please is time to hit the pillow
7th Apr 2023 4:25am
Beautiful woman, got to use pictures of beautiful smart sexy woman at the DUP. You both got to enjoy the wild ride of Love. Keep on writing.
7th Apr 2023 1:01am
