The Bones Willow

It's a beautiful ode to the coming of spring! As a memory of the awakening times of the year!

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It flows nicely, I do not understand it entirely I apologize.

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Mystical imagery. Very nice.

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I think you meant your second word to be eventides.

Sorry, I'm a pain in the butt perfectionist sometimes, lol

I fixed it. I bad.

This read has a quiet yet pending ominous feel to it for me

Beautiful in the inception, yet somewhat cryptic.

Still, i like much of the descriptives throughout

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I get the feel of life protecting death, as in holding a reverance for the departed. While the images are prominently sinister, the traces of life that pop up give a hope for rejuvenation.  There is some depth to the plotting of the thoughts here, with an obvious linguistic understanding of how to provoke the reader to take a second look.  
   
The choice of graphic accompaniment extends the atmosphere visually, where the words are already doing their best to contrive an eery scene. The windows of light among the willows remain the escape that hope brings to the soul that longs.

Bingo

Great imagery. Great flow. Nicely done!

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Beautifully done!

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This poem is engaging, intriguing and filled with colorful, vivid imagery. Fantastic, spill. Infact, it is to me one of your very best poems to date. I applaud you!
P.S. Excellent choice of picture to go with your poem, as well. I love it!

Thank you. My emotions ride waves, that one without a soul would fail to understand,

I agree with faithmarie dear friend. The imagery and flow are fantastic. There is an eerie, ethereal quality to the poem that lingers.
Bravo, we’ll done.

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Dear PS,

I concur with my esteemed poets above. This has a dark spiritual flow to it that is wonderfully mythical and mystical all at once. You’re a master at finding great pictures to accentuate your words. Great piece. H🌷

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