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Shake my breath
Shades of freedom
Shapes of death
Blades of wisdom
shake my breath
Love is proud
Hate is loud
Courage is displaced within the crowd
Help is honourable
Shame is deplorable
Doubt, insurmountable
Fame, adorable
Privacy is golden
Lunacy is sheer
Pleasure is penchant
And so is fear
The price we pay to find our way
Limits each in what we say
There was a time when we could all relax
They are but words
It’s how we react
Shapes of death
Blades of wisdom
shake my breath
Love is proud
Hate is loud
Courage is displaced within the crowd
Help is honourable
Shame is deplorable
Doubt, insurmountable
Fame, adorable
Privacy is golden
Lunacy is sheer
Pleasure is penchant
And so is fear
The price we pay to find our way
Limits each in what we say
There was a time when we could all relax
They are but words
It’s how we react
Published 29th Mar 2023
| Edited 29th Oct 2024
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12th Apr 2023 7:28am
Most excellent writing here! This takes my breath away with the message said here and the mastery of which you pen it. Kudos on a marvelous piece! :) In awe of your talent
12th Apr 2023 1:02pm
Thanks for taking the time to read some of my work Michael. I appreciate your feedback.
