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MOUTH WATERING TEMPTATION
The warm ocean
breeze is challenging
sea gulls in flight
to fly straight.
The lingering sun worshippers
are collecting the last
rays of sun on their bodies;
as I walk...OMG there it
is...my breath is taken
away. It has been a long
time. it is a mouth watering
temptation...I hurry to buy
the last piece of cotton candy.
Meet me at the KISSING PACE
and I'll share, OKAY?
breeze is challenging
sea gulls in flight
to fly straight.
The lingering sun worshippers
are collecting the last
rays of sun on their bodies;
as I walk...OMG there it
is...my breath is taken
away. It has been a long
time. it is a mouth watering
temptation...I hurry to buy
the last piece of cotton candy.
Meet me at the KISSING PACE
and I'll share, OKAY?
Published 29th Mar 2023
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29th Mar 2023 4:49am
Dear TO,
I’m here waiting for my share of the cotton candy…it’s great to see you. I see you’ve lost none of your ability to set a scene and create a wonderful vibe with sweet ending. H🌷
I’m here waiting for my share of the cotton candy…it’s great to see you. I see you’ve lost none of your ability to set a scene and create a wonderful vibe with sweet ending. H🌷
29th Mar 2023 2:34pm
How wonderful to hear from you. thanks for the gracious comment as always hugs, kisses, and peace, Oral
29th Mar 2023 7:12am
29th Mar 2023 12:45pm
Anonymous
29th Mar 2023 2:27pm
I like the line about sun-worshippers and the reference to a kissing place made me giggle. 🤭
29th Mar 2023 4:53pm
29th Mar 2023 4:40pm
