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Fallen

I am Lost in paradise
Surrounded by flourishing orchards and flowers
Lilas, roses
Intoxicating scents  
But to me those are rotten
A great fire burns inside of me  
And seems to ignite the garden of Eden
I no longer know if in hell or paradise I am
Since the object of my love is absent  
I too feel  gone
Written by LiliH13
Published | Edited 18th Mar 2023
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