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Thorns
Thorns mourn the rose
clipped and displayed
to wilt and dispose
in a life and death trade
lost love gone
memories fade
thorns carry on
not lonely but neglected
not bitter but betrayed
not discouraged but rejected
forever unafraid
mourning the rose
clipped and displayed
clipped and displayed
to wilt and dispose
in a life and death trade
lost love gone
memories fade
thorns carry on
not lonely but neglected
not bitter but betrayed
not discouraged but rejected
forever unafraid
mourning the rose
clipped and displayed
Published 14th Mar 2023
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15th Mar 2023 1:18pm
I love the way you wrote this poem, and this is my favorite part.
"not lonely but neglected
not bitter but betrayed
not discouraged but rejected"
LJ
"not lonely but neglected
not bitter but betrayed
not discouraged but rejected"
LJ
15th Mar 2023 5:55pm
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