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fear of missing out from the world
neither will those days
neither will the night
neither will it be sunny
neither will it rain
the leaves will not fall from the branches
the thirst of the soul will not be quenched
all my dreams will be lost
my existence will disappear
nor will there be peace
tears will not flow from the eyes
all the questions will remain as it is
will not get any answer
you will stay
everyone will stay.
you will listen
everyone will listen
get offended and persuading
everything will stop
and I will pass by
neither will the night
neither will it be sunny
neither will it rain
the leaves will not fall from the branches
the thirst of the soul will not be quenched
all my dreams will be lost
my existence will disappear
nor will there be peace
tears will not flow from the eyes
all the questions will remain as it is
will not get any answer
you will stay
everyone will stay.
you will listen
everyone will listen
get offended and persuading
everything will stop
and I will pass by
Published 11th Mar 2023
Author's Note
The soul is not yet adorned by someone's love and the time has come to leave the body.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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11th Mar 2023 9:26am
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11th Mar 2023 10:44am
Anytime.. I'm going to be on here in my free time.. I hate that I can only do two poems per 8 hours
12th Mar 2023 3:24am
Ha ha
I can understand ajan how much you are excited to share your thoughts and this time limit session is a bit irritable. Well keep patience to post 😀
I can understand ajan how much you are excited to share your thoughts and this time limit session is a bit irritable. Well keep patience to post 😀
11th Mar 2023 9:38am
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11th Mar 2023 9:59am
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11th Mar 2023 10:10am
Hey there
Thank you so much for reading my poem deeply
And for your meaningful comment.. it's a lot for me
Much Love 💛
Thank you so much for reading my poem deeply
And for your meaningful comment.. it's a lot for me
Much Love 💛
Anonymous
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Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
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11th Mar 2023 7:31pm
Very resonant writing, I often feel similar to how you describe, life can be so difficult and it can be hard to connect with others that feel the same and understand.
12th Mar 2023 3:17am
Yes. Life is as beautiful as it is ugly. We dream, think something else and life takes us to some other unexpetable aspect and leaves us. Thank you Daniel for reading and responding.
12th Mar 2023 6:55am
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6th Jun 2023 9:28am
At least you’re honest and your poem will resonate with many folk on here myself included. Excellent write
6th Jun 2023 1:18pm
