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bittersweet
i told you everything
you knew about every detail
laid myself in your hands
like it was my undoubted fait
in the end, it hurt me so much
and i hurt you, too
now were not talking anymore
and i try to heal
from comparing us
except i’m 20 years younger
thought i needed to be perfect
in order to be liked
to be good
misinterpreted your words
day by day
almost a year passed since that day in may
passed by
almost a year passed
since you completely altered my life
i would do it all again
prickles on my skin
bittersweet sensation
you knew about every detail
laid myself in your hands
like it was my undoubted fait
in the end, it hurt me so much
and i hurt you, too
now were not talking anymore
and i try to heal
from comparing us
except i’m 20 years younger
thought i needed to be perfect
in order to be liked
to be good
misinterpreted your words
day by day
almost a year passed since that day in may
passed by
almost a year passed
since you completely altered my life
i would do it all again
prickles on my skin
bittersweet sensation
Published 9th Mar 2023
Author's Note
she once said that everything went wrong between us, that she is at fault for me feeling like i felt. and, i hate to state that, she might be right. but that doesn’t make her the criminal, does it? i don't know what’s right and what’s wrong. i just know that i feel guilty for hurting her like that, for letting that happen - happen to us. i miss her.
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9th Mar 2023 6:55pm
Love can bring upon many emotions as well as endurance through thick and thin.
10th Mar 2023 6:21am
People meet for some reason in life, but sometimes they meet without any reason. Some teach lessons and some change lives. well deeply crafted!
