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Sunrise and sunset
exist
equally splendid
as your hands
on my body
(on my mind);
I understand
beauty
now.
exist
equally splendid
as your hands
on my body
(on my mind);
I understand
beauty
now.
Published 9th Mar 2023
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Anonymous
10th Mar 2023 2:07am
So sweet!
10th Mar 2023 2:24am
Anonymous
10th Mar 2023 2:27am
Weren't we polite? Lol
10th Mar 2023 2:32am
Yeah it’s kind of weird. I didn’t even say ‘fucknugs’ or sling dirty underwear.
Is the world ending?!
Anonymous
10th Mar 2023 2:36am
Fuck I hope not. I just started having fun ❤️
10th Mar 2023 2:44am
I know, right?!
Assbangles!
(I don’t know, man. I was just scared by the white space and just typed some shit.)
10th Mar 2023 2:55am
10th Mar 2023 2:57am
You were one syllable away from an incredible haiku that would have upstaged my shit.
But as it stands… ya didn’t.
So thanks.
10th Mar 2023 2:58am
10th Mar 2023 3:03am
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/441883-channeling-wassily-kandinsky/
10th Mar 2023 3:09am
I need a commission at this point, buddy. My comments have become your billboards
Fucking New Yorker.
Fucking New Yorker.
10th Mar 2023 3:17am
10th Mar 2023 4:03am
PoetSpeak, don't knock Florida. Because every one of you New Yorkers end up moving here!
You're probably already here! Just hiding that fact! Lol.
Even Californians are coming here now, in droves! It's nuts!
(You're allowed, come on in buddy).
You're probably already here! Just hiding that fact! Lol.
Even Californians are coming here now, in droves! It's nuts!
(You're allowed, come on in buddy).
10th Mar 2023 11:36am
I do own part of a condo in South Florida but haven't used it in awhile. My sister is there now. I went to college in Florida. Got nothing against any state. State of being is another story ...
10th Mar 2023 4:06am
Obviously they understood beauty right before you did. Because their hands were on your body.
It's in the details, Betty.
It's in the details, Betty.
10th Mar 2023 1:53pm
Jesus wept.
Damn, comments like that are too squishy for me, I start swooning and shit. Next I’ll be fawning over your ass… Styyxxx can you open this jar for me… can you put on these handcuffs for me… can you cancel plans for a few days…..
What the fuck?
Also, thanks.
Damn, comments like that are too squishy for me, I start swooning and shit. Next I’ll be fawning over your ass… Styyxxx can you open this jar for me… can you put on these handcuffs for me… can you cancel plans for a few days…..
What the fuck?
Also, thanks.
12th Mar 2023 5:08am
Dear B,
Oh yeah…let me tell you all about him. Built like a brick shit house even god thought he was hot! Enough about me, your minimalist writes are really great. I’m too verbose to carry it off so I admire it in others. Straight shooting and simply terrific. Keep ‘em coming. H🌷
Oh yeah…let me tell you all about him. Built like a brick shit house even god thought he was hot! Enough about me, your minimalist writes are really great. I’m too verbose to carry it off so I admire it in others. Straight shooting and simply terrific. Keep ‘em coming. H🌷
12th Mar 2023 1:19pm
