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Surrender- with the talented Crimsin

Destroyed, She clutched her mangled heart,
unaware the darkness was listening.

Oh humble day, cast not your eyes upon this darkling
true.
Who now saunters admist the shadows.
In the tempest of it all, her pain is lovely.

A starless night vibrates with sinister stirrings,
abysmal echoing, talk of a great love stolen.
Beholden to her deepest heart's desires.
Fate proved cruel and took away her love forever.
Drenched in tears, she lay crippled,
in a maze of eternal why's.

Lost to the world she keens, she thought unheard,
she troubled the restless demons listening.
They were enticed by her agonized wail of sorrow.
A dark lullabye of whispers lulls her to surrender
to the darkness.

A shadow descends upon her gaping holes.
Her heart beats, but now lacks
a soul.
Written by deliabear (Debbie)
Published
Author's Note
My most heartfelt thanks to the exquisite ideas and writing of Crimsin ❤️, which inspired this poem.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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