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Imperfect World
In a perfect world, I would be happy.
I would smile, laugh.
I would feel joy.
I would pick flowers and make bouquets for the one I love.
I would love, in a perfect world.
But this is not a perfect world, I am not happy.
I do not smile, I do not laugh.
I do not feel joy.
I do not pick flowers and make bouquets for the ones I love.
I do not love, in this imperfect world.
This world produces pain and sorrow.
We all feel it.
Hope? There is none left
This is an imperfect world today, and it will be an imperfect world tomorrow.
I would smile, laugh.
I would feel joy.
I would pick flowers and make bouquets for the one I love.
I would love, in a perfect world.
But this is not a perfect world, I am not happy.
I do not smile, I do not laugh.
I do not feel joy.
I do not pick flowers and make bouquets for the ones I love.
I do not love, in this imperfect world.
This world produces pain and sorrow.
We all feel it.
Hope? There is none left
This is an imperfect world today, and it will be an imperfect world tomorrow.
Published 4th Mar 2023
Author's Note
I was inspired to write this after I was broken, left beaten and bruised by this cruel world. I want to share my pain with those who also feel it and the ones who dont.
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I am not perfect, but I detest the fools who have put a dent into society. Well done.
4th Mar 2023 8:20pm
4th Mar 2023 9:20pm
I feel your poem but don't forget how to love, otherwise, there is definitely no hope!
4th Mar 2023 9:47pm
A shift in your mindset can make a world of difference. Writing your feelings down is a start to the healing process. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed your poem
6th Mar 2023 00:25am
You are perfect in this messy imperfect world . And you write beautifully I really connect with your words
