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morbid
morbid thoughts go through me
like what will my death be like
will people laugh on my final day?
because I died in some ridiculous way
will it be a surprise ending?
sneaking up on me unexpected
will it be spectacular?
having people gossip about me in whispers
I hope it's something memorable
after all I've been waiting for it my whole life for it
Published 27th Feb 2023
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27th Feb 2023 10:39am
I loved the questions regarding the end of our mortality. And your dark last lines, I can relate. Really good writing.
27th Feb 2023 3:32pm
good morning beautiful Debbie thank you I talk with our creator and oddly enough these were some of the questions I asked prompted by a story I read about an eighty five year old lady being taken an alligator I thought what a story about your death and I wondered what mine would be like... so I wrote this poem I deeply appreciate your thoughts here 💕
27th Feb 2023 4:57pm
I heard about that story with the elderly woman and the alligator. There is a quote I cannot exactly recall - " I'm going to show up to my death a little drunk and a little late, lol. I very much like your writing style.
27th Feb 2023 11:57pm
thank you graciously and I yours 💕 I deeply appreciate the quote it sounds like me lol...
