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Day after day, night after night
One shot
One fix
One more
Just in case
Sleep deprived
Counting time
Remembering
That bitter taste
What you want
What you need
You stop
And count in haste
A pre-spent life
Of pain and fear
Too real to go
To waste
One fix
One more
Just in case
Sleep deprived
Counting time
Remembering
That bitter taste
What you want
What you need
You stop
And count in haste
A pre-spent life
Of pain and fear
Too real to go
To waste
Published 25th Feb 2023
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26th Feb 2023 12:19pm
You are a poet and an artist! These are not things people say you are. You just are, or are not. Good work. Keep painting your page with the truth.
Bat
Bat
2nd Mar 2023 11:12pm
Thanks man I appreciate it. It took me so many years.... Still have issues with the quality of my work, despite the positive feedback... I am 70% water 20% anxiety and 10% self doubt lol
5th Mar 2023 1:53pm
