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Secret silence.
Secret love.
Only one place to think...
And nothing to think of.
A simple mindset.
And pain unlike any other...
A feeling of which pity and breathlessness smother.
A real sensation.
But not to another...
Until death overcomes.
The fate of a lover...
There is guilt. There is love.
A whole world of emotion to uncover,
yet the fighter will live on, to sin, ....as God hovers.
Secret love.
Only one place to think...
And nothing to think of.
A simple mindset.
And pain unlike any other...
A feeling of which pity and breathlessness smother.
A real sensation.
But not to another...
Until death overcomes.
The fate of a lover...
There is guilt. There is love.
A whole world of emotion to uncover,
yet the fighter will live on, to sin, ....as God hovers.
Published 8th Apr 2012
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8th Apr 2012 5:52pm
18th Apr 2012 1:34am
Anonymous
9th Jan 2013 8:40am
Good poem, the line..."a feeling of, is maybe a bit long, could be put into a shorter stanza, same with the end...Else its a nicely penned piece
21st Jul 2024 1:42pm
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14th Jan 2025 4:12am
Enjoyed reading this very much.
"Until death overcomes.
The fate of a lover...". Great line here, heavy
"Until death overcomes.
The fate of a lover...". Great line here, heavy
14th Jan 2025 3:16pm
