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Unspent Dreams
Look at all these offerings;
Flawless addictions
A paralyzing,
amplifying,
complete malediction
Inserting the defective source
in a rundown operation
Is an anonymity that captures you and
leads this solemn nation
In a flow of raucous energy
In a river of silentious screams
Casualties fall one by one
Leaving behind their unspent dreams
Obviate the presence of reality
and burn your soul where you lay
To whom this wisdom shall be odious
Changes day by day
Flawless addictions
A paralyzing,
amplifying,
complete malediction
Inserting the defective source
in a rundown operation
Is an anonymity that captures you and
leads this solemn nation
In a flow of raucous energy
In a river of silentious screams
Casualties fall one by one
Leaving behind their unspent dreams
Obviate the presence of reality
and burn your soul where you lay
To whom this wisdom shall be odious
Changes day by day
Published 14th Jan 2023
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15th Jan 2023 5:14am
There's a lot one could apply this to offhand such as society in general or social media, your writing is intriguing to contemplate.
15th Jan 2023 12:01pm
You picked up on it - I wanted this poem to be non-specific so it could be applied to any addictive behaviour. I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you
