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My Eyes Upon Her
My eyes upon her
beautiful, breathless silence.
Whilst she sleeps forever,
I whisper to her in prayer.
Hoping she'll come back,
I know that'll never be.
I consider setting foot
into the grave to find her.
beautiful, breathless silence.
Whilst she sleeps forever,
I whisper to her in prayer.
Hoping she'll come back,
I know that'll never be.
I consider setting foot
into the grave to find her.
Published 14th Jan 2023
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Anonymous
14th Jan 2023 9:51am
Hope for the best... She will come back..
14th Jan 2023 8:34pm
15th Jan 2023 8:24am
Dear D,
Haunting and powerful. To experience a love that romantic is epic. Your couplet formatting makes this piece flow but the love…outshines all. Great piece. H🌷
Haunting and powerful. To experience a love that romantic is epic. Your couplet formatting makes this piece flow but the love…outshines all. Great piece. H🌷
16th Jan 2023 1:56pm
