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Long Ache
Departed
leaving me alone
no path to follow
future unsown
penetrating ache
always in bereavement
unable to heal
my heart’s discontent
years have passed
I am never the same
the loss of you
has no gain
leaving me alone
no path to follow
future unsown
penetrating ache
always in bereavement
unable to heal
my heart’s discontent
years have passed
I am never the same
the loss of you
has no gain
Published 9th Jan 2023
Author's Note
For my mother with love and adoration.
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9th Jan 2023 5:50am
Dear M,
I thought this piece a loving and lovely homage. It reminded me that even though those I love may have gone they’re still with me, in my thoughts, heart and soul. H🌷
I thought this piece a loving and lovely homage. It reminded me that even though those I love may have gone they’re still with me, in my thoughts, heart and soul. H🌷
9th Jan 2023 6:27am
Thank you H. You are never quite the same after such a loss but you shouldn’t be. It keeps their memory near and dear. Thank you for the read and the RL is an honour. Bless dear friend❤️🙏
