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Poem #1: January '23 (The Beginning)
*Reflections of the Mind:
A full-bodied moon
Backed by a space blue sky
Giant trees' silhouettes
Listen for the wind's subtle cry
Blocked
In the physical and mental senses
Pencil in hand
Pensive demands, too tense
A swell of dysfunction
Collapsing into waves of routine
Wipe away the dust
Expose what lies beneath
A full-bodied moon
Backed by a space blue sky
Giant trees' silhouettes
Listen for the wind's subtle cry
Blocked
In the physical and mental senses
Pencil in hand
Pensive demands, too tense
A swell of dysfunction
Collapsing into waves of routine
Wipe away the dust
Expose what lies beneath
Published 7th Jan 2023
| Edited 27th Mar 2023
Author's Note
A collection of my thoughts from the start of January 2023.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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7th Jan 2023 11:20pm
Wonderful. Good flow as you worked in the rhymes. And obviously an excellent message delivered throughout it.
