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Do You.?.
This stream,
it
dreams in fairies… Didn’t you know? Oh.
If you did not,
you will,
Whether for the thrill or for the will, you will know.
And I will listen
to
the glisten, solemn; I will listen to your poem, because, you… Are…
Me…
And who is that.?.
I know.
Do you?
it
dreams in fairies… Didn’t you know? Oh.
If you did not,
you will,
Whether for the thrill or for the will, you will know.
And I will listen
to
the glisten, solemn; I will listen to your poem, because, you… Are…
Me…
And who is that.?.
I know.
Do you?
Published 6th Jan 2023
Author's Note
Listening to Seven Swans by Sufjan Stevens...
It turned this one...
But I like that very much...
It turned this one...
But I like that very much...
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6th Jan 2023 8:49pm
This reminds me of a female I once knew...
She believed in fairies...
I did not at the time...
I do now...
This makes me think about the formula for heartbreak...
How it is individual...
And yet...
Universal...
She believed in fairies...
I did not at the time...
I do now...
This makes me think about the formula for heartbreak...
How it is individual...
And yet...
Universal...
7th Jan 2023 8:42am
Thank you Cipher...
It sounds like perhaps you
performed some deep introspection...
Based upon this experience...
The formula for heartbreak...?
That is a cool turn of phrase...
I shall explore that
It sounds like perhaps you
performed some deep introspection...
Based upon this experience...
The formula for heartbreak...?
That is a cool turn of phrase...
I shall explore that
Anonymous
7th Jan 2023 2:05am
Abstract yet tangible...just the way I dig it!!
7th Jan 2023 8:45am
Thank you Naajir...
I feel like...
Its like the proverb: Nothing new under the sun...
But I think that consciousness, like the universe,
is ever expanding...
And one's art, one's craft, should reflect this phenomenon...
I think that such a reflection occurs in the balance
between the abstract and tangible...
Much appreciated...
I feel like...
Its like the proverb: Nothing new under the sun...
But I think that consciousness, like the universe,
is ever expanding...
And one's art, one's craft, should reflect this phenomenon...
I think that such a reflection occurs in the balance
between the abstract and tangible...
Much appreciated...
