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After Sex - my daughter's 100-word story
Mint-scented breath panted against my neck.
His heat covered me. I pressed my palms against his pelvis and felt him pullout. His cock lay pressed between us, still wet and firm.
I felt content, maybe happy, but empty inside.
Mom was away when we got home so we talked, then kissed. When his hand slipped under my loose blouse there was no bra and no hesitation from me. We had no protection, but nothing could stop us.
What happens after sex? I couldn’t say I loved him. I barely knew him.
He looked at me and sighed.
“It’s just sex,” I said.
His heat covered me. I pressed my palms against his pelvis and felt him pullout. His cock lay pressed between us, still wet and firm.
I felt content, maybe happy, but empty inside.
Mom was away when we got home so we talked, then kissed. When his hand slipped under my loose blouse there was no bra and no hesitation from me. We had no protection, but nothing could stop us.
What happens after sex? I couldn’t say I loved him. I barely knew him.
He looked at me and sighed.
“It’s just sex,” I said.
Published 22nd Dec 2022
| Edited 23rd Oct 2023
Author's Note
My daughter's 100-word story based on an experience six years ago when she was 17.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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22nd Dec 2022 12:38pm
You always inspire us with your writing
Fabulous
Fascinating
arousing
Interesting
Naughty
erotic
In the last
Well done
Fabulous
Fascinating
arousing
Interesting
Naughty
erotic
In the last
Well done
22nd Dec 2022 10:19pm
22nd Dec 2022 1:26pm
Like the pairing of 'bra' and 'hesitation' in this sentence:
When his hand slipped under my loose blouse there was no bra or hesitation from me.
When his hand slipped under my loose blouse there was no bra or hesitation from me.
22nd Dec 2022 10:20pm
Yes. It was an image I won't forget. She has the habit of forgetting her undergarments.
23rd Dec 2022 7:47am
22nd Dec 2022 9:35pm
