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RETURNED FAVOUR
Before we dive into the bed
she kneels, her sweet lips give me head,
making me rise to occasion
at her snaking tongue's persuasion.
Aroused, I return the favour,
taste cunnlingual flavour,
teasing her petals in and out,
massaging clit, making her shout.
making her lubrication flow,
then, where my head was, dick will go,
his shaft buried up to the hilt
with squelch of juices that she's spilt.
she kneels, her sweet lips give me head,
making me rise to occasion
at her snaking tongue's persuasion.
Aroused, I return the favour,
taste cunnlingual flavour,
teasing her petals in and out,
massaging clit, making her shout.
making her lubrication flow,
then, where my head was, dick will go,
his shaft buried up to the hilt
with squelch of juices that she's spilt.
Published 19th Dec 2022
| Edited 13th Jan 2023
Author's Note
Inspired by some recent oral sex pieces, particularly by Moroccan Poet's Eenjoy you from which the picture is shared.
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19th Dec 2022 11:35am
19th Dec 2022 12:37pm
20th Dec 2022 9:22pm
You've personified your protagonist's dick. Clever!
" ' his ' shaft buried..."
not many would think of that
" ' his ' shaft buried..."
not many would think of that
21st Dec 2022 7:24am
I followed Moroccan Poet's example, he often personifies the female parts as 'her'.
21st Dec 2022 8:29am
24th Dec 2022 2:09am
The picture had me at hello, my wise poet and your words had me at the pleasure of your tantalizing words.. very nice content.
