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Karma to burn
We think therefore we are, So we think
Poured out heart love to overflowing
Will God show their face and wink?
As to dry up tears of unknowing,
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Second sorriest excuse as belief
Seal of soul bespelled credulous
False principles to flee in retreat
Angel wing demon serendipitous,
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Temporal illusions in reality's slot
Long lost canon prooving their text
Nothing is written that isn't a thought
Dream't life unreal, thus forgets the rest.
Published 6th Dec 2022
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27th Feb 2023 7:55am
"Nothing is written that isn't a thought", I like that. I enjoyed the rhyme.
LJ
LJ
2nd Mar 2023 3:45am
27th Nov 2024 2:34am
I really enjoyed this poem, specifically this stanza:
"Temporal illusions in reality's slot
Long lost canon prooving their text
Nothing is written that isn't a thought
Dream't life unreal, thus forgets the rest"
I really liked the flow of this stanza, and how it made me think. I enjoy reading poetry for many reasons, one of them being that I like poems that make me stop and think. This poem did that- thank you.
"Temporal illusions in reality's slot
Long lost canon prooving their text
Nothing is written that isn't a thought
Dream't life unreal, thus forgets the rest"
I really liked the flow of this stanza, and how it made me think. I enjoy reading poetry for many reasons, one of them being that I like poems that make me stop and think. This poem did that- thank you.
1st Dec 2024 3:44pm
