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So Wrong
You were 25 and what we were doing was wrong,
but I cried no objection as you pulled down my thong.
There was no cry
as you massaged my thigh.
Not a sniffle did I make
with my beauty you did take.
I wanted more,
your little whore.
suck me suck me suck me!
Fuck me, Fuck me, fuck me!
No one had loved me like you did,
and so with my emotions I had to put on the lid.
but I cried no objection as you pulled down my thong.
There was no cry
as you massaged my thigh.
Not a sniffle did I make
with my beauty you did take.
I wanted more,
your little whore.
suck me suck me suck me!
Fuck me, Fuck me, fuck me!
No one had loved me like you did,
and so with my emotions I had to put on the lid.
Published 2nd Apr 2012
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2nd Apr 2012 2:00pm
This is really..eyeopening..very creative and detailed.no one really subjected themself to fault..usually people just make it seem like someone elses..I love it <3
4th Apr 2012 4:22pm
16th Apr 2012 9:18pm
Creative and concise; very good piece here! The inclusion of "love" surprised me as I wasn't anticipating something that positive.
17th Apr 2012 9:05pm
18th Apr 2012 8:48pm
and it wasn't the I love you kind of love... it was the synonym for sex. sorry if i wasn't very specific.
8th May 2013 3:05pm
8th May 2013 3:38pm
