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Stroking her chords
laying back
she let the winds
of summer
carry her away
the smell of rain
rushes across her nipples
as she hikes up
the fabric
of her cotton dress
legs spread open
as the warmth
kisses her petals
fingers teasing
stroking her chords
hips swaying in rhythm
back and forth
sweet bud
in full bloom
as the waves arrive
one after another
sending a raging fire
through her thighs
the storm
leaving her satisfied
and soaking wet
she let the winds
of summer
carry her away
the smell of rain
rushes across her nipples
as she hikes up
the fabric
of her cotton dress
legs spread open
as the warmth
kisses her petals
fingers teasing
stroking her chords
hips swaying in rhythm
back and forth
sweet bud
in full bloom
as the waves arrive
one after another
sending a raging fire
through her thighs
the storm
leaving her satisfied
and soaking wet
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Re. Stroking her chords
27th Nov 2022 6:29pm
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Re. Stroking her chords
28th Nov 2022 3:01am
Very nicely done.
When I'm led to water, I don't anyone to describe too graphically how refreshing and wet it is. I can deduce that myself. But I like to be told how rewarding it is, like your write does. I feel quenched.
I have a pretty simple philosophy when I read erotic things; Ass with class. It's a wonderful find. Yours is perfect.
When I'm led to water, I don't anyone to describe too graphically how refreshing and wet it is. I can deduce that myself. But I like to be told how rewarding it is, like your write does. I feel quenched.
I have a pretty simple philosophy when I read erotic things; Ass with class. It's a wonderful find. Yours is perfect.
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28th Nov 2022 4:50pm
Thank you so very much, I try to stay on the erotic side with lots of blurred lines, but not too many, I want my reader to be able to still see
adore your comment
Always,
JC
adore your comment
Always,
JC
Re. Stroking her chords
28th Nov 2022 6:21am
A beachside musing of letting the waves pleasure you. So reminds me of one of my own poems, link here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/353089-as-the-sea-does-the-shore-inspired-by/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/353089-as-the-sea-does-the-shore-inspired-by/
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Re. Stroking her chords
18th Dec 2022 11:43pm
This is my all-time favorite of yours. Your immersion in nature and your sexual being makes for a super nova between your luscious thighs. I must say you have given me the greatest dream of desire with your sensual poem.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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