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21st Nov 2022 2:52am
The wonderful of you, from two sentences you created a perfect poem
When I read it as I put it I travel with a lot of fantasies
And when you read it together, it is the call of your misery not to wait any longer
When I read it as I put it I travel with a lot of fantasies
And when you read it together, it is the call of your misery not to wait any longer
21st Nov 2022 6:02am
Hoi hoi
Because it needs to be done.
What did @faithmaree say?
Ardently.
Great.
Kind regards, Gus
Because it needs to be done.
What did @faithmaree say?
Ardently.
Great.
Kind regards, Gus
21st Nov 2022 6:13am
21st Nov 2022 7:12pm
"Go deeper
Grim reaper
Come slay
This pussy...." 😎
This is rich, goes down hard (I love the metaphoric reference to the "grim reaper"). Don't quite know if you were being intentional but this paragraph So much sounds like the"Le Petit Mortir"......the slaying of beauty's beast.
In the immortal words of Yul Brenner from the Ten Commandments -"Let it be written, let it be done " 😈🔥💦
Grim reaper
Come slay
This pussy...." 😎
This is rich, goes down hard (I love the metaphoric reference to the "grim reaper"). Don't quite know if you were being intentional but this paragraph So much sounds like the"Le Petit Mortir"......the slaying of beauty's beast.
In the immortal words of Yul Brenner from the Ten Commandments -"Let it be written, let it be done " 😈🔥💦
