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HIS BIRTHDAY SUIT
His birthday suit
was quite hirsute,
like gorilla -
was a thriller.
My own smooth skin
could not begin
to contrast more.
I was in awe.
In our tussle
I would ruffle
his dark chest hair -
and that "down there".
Savour its brush,
making me flush
when against me
he'd hold body.
He was so vain,
sometimes in rain
he'd throw off kit,
to wetten it.
Give me excuse
of a purpose
upon a whim
to towel him.
was quite hirsute,
like gorilla -
was a thriller.
My own smooth skin
could not begin
to contrast more.
I was in awe.
In our tussle
I would ruffle
his dark chest hair -
and that "down there".
Savour its brush,
making me flush
when against me
he'd hold body.
He was so vain,
sometimes in rain
he'd throw off kit,
to wetten it.
Give me excuse
of a purpose
upon a whim
to towel him.
Published 10th Nov 2022
| Edited 11th Nov 2022
Author's Note
Words "birthday suit" was poetry prompt. Imagining a hirsute male body from a female lover's POV.
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10th Nov 2022 10:49am
A poem filled with excitement
lines. Favorite
I was in awe.
his dark chest hair -
Savour its brush,
making me flush
when against me
he'd hold body.
My greetings
MP
lines. Favorite
I was in awe.
his dark chest hair -
Savour its brush,
making me flush
when against me
he'd hold body.
My greetings
MP
11th Nov 2022 6:50am
Thank you. I have added a few extra verses at the end, inspired by the shower scenes in some of your own poems, albeit a shower outdoors in rain I write of.
10th Nov 2022 11:30am
12th Nov 2022 8:01pm
After years of being on DUP, it appears, you still can make a woman smile with your beguiling ponders and this gem is no exception, my wise poet...
13th Nov 2022 7:23am
I was rather imagining the narrator's smile as she enjoys getting up close to him and when giving him that towel rub down.....
