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Take My Hand
Hatered surronds me
People dying
Gang violence
School shootings
Bang another baby has passed away
Tears fall down like rain
World is slowly crumbling
One life one chance
If we work together nomore pain
Love conqures everything
Look to your left smile
Say everythings ok
Grab your baby hold them tight
Little time is left reminise the good times
Tomorrow could be the last goodbye
People dying
Gang violence
School shootings
Bang another baby has passed away
Tears fall down like rain
World is slowly crumbling
One life one chance
If we work together nomore pain
Love conqures everything
Look to your left smile
Say everythings ok
Grab your baby hold them tight
Little time is left reminise the good times
Tomorrow could be the last goodbye
Published 1st Apr 2012
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4th Apr 2012 4:23am
This reads like a community plea, a bit like Marvin Gaye's, "What's Going On". So in awe of your ability to get in there, write something so significant and then wrap it up in so few words. You would totally shock me if you revealed that you went to law school! (Been there and didn't like it much!)
6th Apr 2012 9:15pm
And I have never went to law school I've never even finished my high school diploma I just write what's on my mind on paper
