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Cute
you never knew how scary I was
so you walked right passed me
as if I simply didn't exist
what I wouldn't do for some acknowledgment
I admired how you carried yourself
like an extraterrestrial being too far to reach
even though you were mere steps
it just wasn't meant to be
well, for those that are quitters anyway
you see, I was born a lowlife
mom and dad loved me so very much
but that was the extent of our riches
the kids at school would bully
pushed, punched, poured milk on me
nothing your every day kitchen knife coudn't fix
oh wow!, Sarah would of been 16 today
funny, that's how many times I stabbed her
another year passes, then another
once you started dating others
that's when I had to draw the line
way too cute for me to pass up
sorry, but I must do what I have to
otherwise you'll never know how much I love you
and I couldn't bare opening myself up
not without some kind of leverage
please darling
don't scream
we're in my uncle's cellar
where we will live many loving days
and if you try to escape
I will simply break your legs
but no worries
you will enjoy it here
I will cook and clean
and take care of you like a pet
for me to hug and squeeze
until death!
so you walked right passed me
as if I simply didn't exist
what I wouldn't do for some acknowledgment
I admired how you carried yourself
like an extraterrestrial being too far to reach
even though you were mere steps
it just wasn't meant to be
well, for those that are quitters anyway
you see, I was born a lowlife
mom and dad loved me so very much
but that was the extent of our riches
the kids at school would bully
pushed, punched, poured milk on me
nothing your every day kitchen knife coudn't fix
oh wow!, Sarah would of been 16 today
funny, that's how many times I stabbed her
another year passes, then another
once you started dating others
that's when I had to draw the line
way too cute for me to pass up
sorry, but I must do what I have to
otherwise you'll never know how much I love you
and I couldn't bare opening myself up
not without some kind of leverage
please darling
don't scream
we're in my uncle's cellar
where we will live many loving days
and if you try to escape
I will simply break your legs
but no worries
you will enjoy it here
I will cook and clean
and take care of you like a pet
for me to hug and squeeze
until death!
Published 23rd Oct 2022
Author's Note
On the 9th day of Halloween I give to thee... love.
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24th Oct 2022 5:17am
I love the capture and creepiness of it all. It's almost fable-like in her sad creation. When treating someone badly or being ignorant to the plight of others can come back to literally haunt you! A morbid lesson learned!
It's like an episode of Creepshow or The Twilight Zone!!... Truly awesome, twisted, bloody and with a strange moral to the story!
Fantastically Halloweenie!
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It's like an episode of Creepshow or The Twilight Zone!!... Truly awesome, twisted, bloody and with a strange moral to the story!
Fantastically Halloweenie!
🩸🩸🩸🩸
24th Oct 2022 7:08am
Creepshow haha that's a throwback. In my own mind I would like to think of her as someone that would of been a killer no matter what. Like someone that lacks real emotions or something like that. Though people should of still not have been mean to her hehe. This is probably the first time I wrote in the perspective of a girl. But hey, it's 2022 so why not? Haha 😁
Thank you very much my friend for always being such a great supporter. I truly appreciate it.
Thank you very much my friend for always being such a great supporter. I truly appreciate it.
27th Oct 2022 9:54am
Reminds me of Misery. "I'm you greatest fan." *shiver*
Great imagery once again. Happy scary Halloween in da cellar! *maniacal laughter*
Peace. ;-)
Great imagery once again. Happy scary Halloween in da cellar! *maniacal laughter*
Peace. ;-)
27th Oct 2022 10:07am
Haha yeah I was thinking about Misery when I was coming up with this. I wanted it to be more teen drama but with a hint of Misery so I am glad that came through 😁 thanks for the read, friend. It's very much appreciated.
