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Banana Split
The lights are low
Music soft
Off in a daze
I feel your touch
Sensations shock my body
Your breath on my neck
A soft whisper in my ear
Trimbling I want you I need you
Layers come off
A stare in eachothers eyes
The way you lick your lips
I can tell you want it too
chocolate syrup nuts whip cream and bananas
I hop on the bed and do a full split for you
Banana splits rough sex
Waking up can't walk striaght
Baby that's why I love you
Music soft
Off in a daze
I feel your touch
Sensations shock my body
Your breath on my neck
A soft whisper in my ear
Trimbling I want you I need you
Layers come off
A stare in eachothers eyes
The way you lick your lips
I can tell you want it too
chocolate syrup nuts whip cream and bananas
I hop on the bed and do a full split for you
Banana splits rough sex
Waking up can't walk striaght
Baby that's why I love you
Published 30th Mar 2012
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First of all, way to pick a title. You do a wonderful job of building up interest and providing a vivid image; and all in only 17 lines!
Bravo!
Bravo!
31st Mar 2012 6:25am
23rd Apr 2013 9:19pm
Wow, I would agree great title it got my attention before I even read it. Great erotic piece you have written.
