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Beach Girl
Sand in my feet,
Wind in my hair,
Shells on the ground,
And salt in the air,
Sun in the sky,
Fish in the sea,
Lotion on my skin,
That's beach life for me!
Wind in my hair,
Shells on the ground,
And salt in the air,
Sun in the sky,
Fish in the sea,
Lotion on my skin,
That's beach life for me!
Published 19th Oct 2022
Author's Note
I live two minutes away from the beach, so this is beach life for me!
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- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
19th Oct 2022 8:54pm
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19th Oct 2022 9:06pm
I used to live close to the water… now I am way too far inland… nice crisp write…
20th Oct 2022 10:22am
Dear J,
Wonderful imagery in your poem. I really enjoyed this. You’ve packed a lot of beauty with a talent for brevity. Welcome to DU. Lovely write. H🌷
Wonderful imagery in your poem. I really enjoyed this. You’ve packed a lot of beauty with a talent for brevity. Welcome to DU. Lovely write. H🌷
20th Oct 2022 2:30pm
20th Oct 2022 8:51pm
21st Oct 2022 3:54pm
