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Hell Bent (......her Carnal Scent)
Is it wrong of me ,
lingering in want of your carnal scent?
U tickle my member
the core of my being......hell bent
on knowing “you”
moist lips tightly closed
yet spoken so freely and loud in the silence
in passing
gasping the wafting fragrance
sensing your passing glance
flickered flame
the madness of a libidinous cue
the insane yearning
me wanting you........
…...and I'm not alone,
feeling your empathy too
the reflection in your smile
your flower, wet with the dew
of a deeply intimate curiosity
so am I wrong
to so desperately want
the carnal scent
of you?
…..all over me?
Published 19th Oct 2022
| Edited 20th Oct 2022
Author's Note
Just wanting to touch you, feel you........not really knowing more than your name. Sharing passing cordiality. Am I wrong.......?
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- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:50am
20th Oct 2022 00:10am
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26th Oct 2022 8:38pm
This is all you, I think. I don’t recognize the words of some of the songwriters we both admire and yet you have my thinking of both the Isley Brothers and Bobby Caldwell (My Flame). Tight write!
22nd Nov 2022 6:27am
