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Hells fire
Through the thick grey ashen smoke
I see the flames flare
And I can hear the crackling of brimstone and hearth
As I step closer to hells Inferno
The burn feels oh so good!
Kat storm calaway
(C)2022
I see the flames flare
And I can hear the crackling of brimstone and hearth
As I step closer to hells Inferno
The burn feels oh so good!
Kat storm calaway
(C)2022
Published 13th Oct 2022
Author's Note
This poem was inspired by the wrestler kane's character
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13th Oct 2022 5:53pm
13th Oct 2022 6:28pm
13th Oct 2022 6:24pm
Dear K,
I really liked the vibe and scene in this poem. The notion of feeling pleasure from pain is ironic and something I think a lot of us can relate to as a way of feeling anything at all. Great piece. H🌷
I really liked the vibe and scene in this poem. The notion of feeling pleasure from pain is ironic and something I think a lot of us can relate to as a way of feeling anything at all. Great piece. H🌷
13th Oct 2022 6:27pm
Thank you so much for your kind words I have been though a lot of pain in my life
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14th Oct 2022 4:48am
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14th Oct 2022 5:05am
Ted Thank you for your kind words yes my dreams can be very intense at times .iam glad to hear that some one appreciates my talent ...I most definately will
