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Note to Self
wondering and contemplating
how to change the outlook
not of mine
but of yours
found that we can be so mean
like minds are a rarity
yes I find myself alone
and I'm not the only one
which shouldn't be in a community
sometimes we hate earth other
attack each other
all while secretly caring for each other
maybe poets are too needy
better word would be greedy
some are blessed and some are cursed
I been put through the shredder
carried on in inclement weather
note to self
keep it together
because this world is full of haters
some days I feel like a fool
other days I'm a God
creativity craves fed
guess most of us are starving to death
yeah, I have a few in the chamber
when it's time to shoot
will there be anyone left?
I said sorry so many times
not sure if I can do it anymore
I have a few people that deserve it
and I would
if I wasn't so afraid of fucking that all up
I been put through the shredder
carried on in inclement weather
note to self
keep it together
because this world is full of haters
I live two lives, or I sure hope so
probably more like a 100
because poetry makes me something I'm not
and shows everything I am
breaking down walls
while also hiding me away
trying to keep my friends around
"common, focus, focus"
if you are confused
congratulations! you're not completely mad
how to change the outlook
not of mine
but of yours
found that we can be so mean
like minds are a rarity
yes I find myself alone
and I'm not the only one
which shouldn't be in a community
sometimes we hate earth other
attack each other
all while secretly caring for each other
maybe poets are too needy
better word would be greedy
some are blessed and some are cursed
I been put through the shredder
carried on in inclement weather
note to self
keep it together
because this world is full of haters
some days I feel like a fool
other days I'm a God
creativity craves fed
guess most of us are starving to death
yeah, I have a few in the chamber
when it's time to shoot
will there be anyone left?
I said sorry so many times
not sure if I can do it anymore
I have a few people that deserve it
and I would
if I wasn't so afraid of fucking that all up
I been put through the shredder
carried on in inclement weather
note to self
keep it together
because this world is full of haters
I live two lives, or I sure hope so
probably more like a 100
because poetry makes me something I'm not
and shows everything I am
breaking down walls
while also hiding me away
trying to keep my friends around
"common, focus, focus"
if you are confused
congratulations! you're not completely mad
Published 11th Oct 2022
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11th Oct 2022 10:45am
Engaging write... excellent flow... nice straight and slant rhymes... so relatable...
11th Oct 2022 11:46am
I love music so it shows very much in my poetry 😁 thanks for the read, friend. It is always very much appreciated.
I love the way this flows... I can tell the love of lyrical rhythm that naturally comes from your pen... it really shines here, DC.
There are so many lines of resonance.... captivating, my friend.
Enjoyed!
🌹-B
There are so many lines of resonance.... captivating, my friend.
Enjoyed!
🌹-B
12th Oct 2022 4:03am
Glad you enjoyed it my friend 😁 I saw hellraiser today btw. It was a cool take on the films. My favorite line was something like "a devil should know another devil" something like that hehe.
Appreciated the read 🤓
Appreciated the read 🤓
12th Oct 2022 4:21am
Yeah... I remember that line.... I had an issue with the new pinhead. She's not brutal enough, in my opinion... lol... I love that actress though... She's from the series sense8 on Netflix (which is incredible!!) she's the character Naomi... which through me for a loop! It was an ok reimagining with some killer new cenobite creature/characters that creeped me out!!! I am looking forward to see the supposedly last Halloween movie on the 14th. Halloween The End!!.... I can't help it, I love those movies (most of them, except those stupid Season of the Witch ones, without Michael Myers) Rob Zombie did awesome remakes... these last two are outside of his versions... So I'm curious to see how they end 40+ years of Micheal Myers!!
-frome one 🤓 to another🤓
haha!!!
-You're very welcome.
-frome one 🤓 to another🤓
haha!!!
-You're very welcome.
12th Oct 2022 4:35am
Maybe it ends. I mean it ended before haha. But maybe the last with Jamie Lee Curtis. And yeah I did really enjoyed Rob Zombie's take on it.
