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Love
Love
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Love
you shouldn't use that much water
this jar could of been something delicious
if only it wasn't so diluted
Written by
DevilsChild
Published
10th Oct 2022
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Re. Love
InDreamz
10th Oct 2022 9:05am
Really DC, you have that knack to say so much in just a few words...
This is a great write... Deep n so eloquent... Bravo👏
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DevilsChild
10th Oct 2022 10:03am
That's such a sweet compliment 😁 this was kind of a take off another line I had in a old poem. Went something like love is like kool-aid, too much and it's too sweet, not enough and it gets diluted.
Many thanks, friend 😁
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Re. Love
PoetSpeak
10th Oct 2022 3:56pm
Made me laugh
So true
Everything is broken or diluted but still a smiley face remains
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DevilsChild
11th Oct 2022 2:34am
Can't go wrong with the kool-aid guy, oh yeah! Haha
Thanks for the read, friend 😁
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Re. Love
Anonymous
14th Oct 2022 00:57am
Plus, sometimes love can come crashing through your walls, too... haha 😂 😂 😂
Really nostalgic and a wonderfully clever metaphor! .. I remember the wooden spoon we used to stir, it was stained red!!... lol...
Terrific ink, DC!
🌹-B
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Re: Re. Love
DevilsChild
14th Oct 2022 2:41am
Haha yes, I think you had the same childhood i did 😁
Thank you for the read, friend. Oh yeah! 🥤
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