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Unedited and Raw
You take me as I am.
Loving unconditionally.
Finding beauty in my flaws.
There’s no pretending;
Just appreciating the realness;
The closeness.
I’ve never experienced a love like this.
Unedited and raw.
Loving unconditionally.
Finding beauty in my flaws.
There’s no pretending;
Just appreciating the realness;
The closeness.
I’ve never experienced a love like this.
Unedited and raw.
Published 1st Oct 2022
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1st Oct 2022 2:36am
11th Oct 2022 2:07pm
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
In this world of robotic conformity, our flaws define our beauty. And without the idea that I am after your bum, I hope I may say that you ARE beautiful.
The way you turned this idea into a poem is downright stunning.
Humane, honest, passionate, you name it.
À beautiful read!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
In this world of robotic conformity, our flaws define our beauty. And without the idea that I am after your bum, I hope I may say that you ARE beautiful.
The way you turned this idea into a poem is downright stunning.
Humane, honest, passionate, you name it.
À beautiful read!
Kind regards, Gus
11th Oct 2022 2:14pm
Hello Gus! Thank you for the thoughtful comment! I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem. God bless! 😊
