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poor bloody commuters

      
     
     
I come from one of those towns that lurk just outside      
the city      
looks down upon and sniffs at      
eighty thirty five      
  every morning      
the train arrives at the city and    
  us poor bloody commuters    
   do a fair bit of your
  work      
     
     
     
     
 
Written by dartford (Paul S...)
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