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The Hole
down the rabbit hole I go,
as my thoughts take control,
what will I find
In this hole of mine
the thoughts never end,
is the common trend
my mind is full of fear,
that is all I hear
Let me go! Let me go!
I am trapped in this hole
Mistakes I cannot escape,
let me go! let me go!
I need a new space
as my thoughts take control,
what will I find
In this hole of mine
the thoughts never end,
is the common trend
my mind is full of fear,
that is all I hear
Let me go! Let me go!
I am trapped in this hole
Mistakes I cannot escape,
let me go! let me go!
I need a new space
Published 11th Sep 2022
Author's Note
My writings are a reflection of my personal struggles, anxieties. and my battle with mental health.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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6th Jan 2023 4:20pm
Your poem accurately describes how our dark thoughts are our worst enemy. It can be difficult to get out of that trap, but i's a struggle that we need to go through. Nicely written, Tlass01.
