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Drinking

It's 5:30 in Hollywood
Florida  
The wind is ripping
Leaves  
Off the  
Trees
As they  
Hit the ground
They begin
Spinning
In violent circles
In a tornado
Like fashion
Whipping  
Crunching
And dragging
On the  
Concrete pavement
And it  
Reminds  
Me  
Of  
Me
when  
I take a drink
Leaving the
Broken  
Pieces  
Behind
And  
I can't do anything
But go where it takes  
Me
It's a lonely
Cold darkness
You can't escape
Written by JacobSchex
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