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Devour Me
Take me like a real man would,
Satisfy me like only you could.
Suck and nibble on my girl,
Treat her like a mother of pearl.
Lick her until she’s dry then wet again,
Keep pleasing her until I scream when.
Your cock is hard and throbbing wanting to join in,
On all fours begging and asking are you ready to sin?
Fuck me now make love to me later,
Pain plus pleasure nothing is greater.
Spank my ass and pull my hair,
Thrust harder until you take me there.
We cum together as we should do,
Out of breath but ready for round two.
Satisfy me like only you could.
Suck and nibble on my girl,
Treat her like a mother of pearl.
Lick her until she’s dry then wet again,
Keep pleasing her until I scream when.
Your cock is hard and throbbing wanting to join in,
On all fours begging and asking are you ready to sin?
Fuck me now make love to me later,
Pain plus pleasure nothing is greater.
Spank my ass and pull my hair,
Thrust harder until you take me there.
We cum together as we should do,
Out of breath but ready for round two.
Published 9th Sep 2022
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9th Sep 2022 2:29am
9th Sep 2022 2:36am
Thank you for the comment and RL Midnight. I’m getting better. Practice makes perfect! 💜💜
9th Sep 2022 2:53am
9th Sep 2022 3:22am
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21st Sep 2022 3:13pm
Hey eyes, sorry it took me so long to get over here. The last couple of weeks have been really hard so I haven't had much reading time or anything else here unfortunately. The title caught my eye immediately and I am so glad it did. I could definitely feel the passion and lust. Mother of pearl really gave me a beautiful imagery too. I must admit I am crap at rhyming although I put in little effort on that so who knows maybe I could. lol But yours is awesome, it just flows along with the sexy erotic imagery you invoke so perfectly. Spanking and pulling hair, oh yeah! definitely need some of that. Cumming together is divine, each feeling the other flowing and those tremors throughout the body holding on tight. Being filled and fulfilled. Oh yeah! ;) I am thoroughly distracted. lol
21st Sep 2022 3:30pm
Kristina, better late than never. I hope things calm
down and get better for you. Glad you stopped by and got distracted. Thank you for the awesome comment and RL! 💜💜
down and get better for you. Glad you stopped by and got distracted. Thank you for the awesome comment and RL! 💜💜
26th Oct 2022 2:52am
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26th Oct 2022 3:36am
Well you went for it 😉 I kinda felt a country girl vibe in this,once I read it I got deep into this it had me in a trance ❤️🔥
28th Dec 2022 2:14am
Wow 👏 👏 👏!!! Very very nice 👌 👍 terrific ink spill!!!! Absolutely pure 👌 fire 🔥 full of lust, passion and erotic desire!! This reminds me of my poem Adidas!! Check it out when get a chance!! Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
28th Dec 2022 3:07am
Thank you Remarkable! Love getting comments like yours! I’ll head your way to give you a read! Thanks again. 💜💜
28th Dec 2022 12:26pm
Your very welcome 🙏!! Devour me reminded me of Adidas!!! This is why I recommended it glad you enjoyed it 👍!!! Appreciate you 🙏 and your kind sweet words!!! Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
21st Feb 2024 4:23pm
Hello.. I'm somewhat new here (again) and just got to reading some of your poems.. they are tastefully erotic, sensual, and sexy! You write like a professional! Amazing! I loved your 'oral me' poem too! Keep up the great words!
3rd Mar 2024 7:22pm
Hello a hidden talent. A professional? Wow what a great comment. Thank you! 💜💜
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30th Mar 2024 00:41am
Thank you for stopping by Richard. Always appreciate comments like yours. 💜
