Golden Apples of the Sun - Rewrite

Golden Apples of the Sun  
Golden apples hang pendulously from trees  
Shining orbs washed in sunlight    
Our faces gilded by the warm rays    
I stand on the ladder across from you    
Plucking the fruit and dropping it into basket    
Your short skirt rides up in the cool breeze    
Revealing thighs, muscle bound from hard labor    
My eyes wander mischievously  
down the apex of your thighs    
Your dark forest revealed in shadowy intimation through sheer white fabric    
You giggle like coed  
catching boyfriend pleasuring self  
I pluck ripened sun fruit from vine    
It drips, luminous with dew drops    
Hand stretched out in friendship    
I grasp the juicy delight in fingers    
As you bite into the flesh with your ivory teeth    
A smile illuminates your face in the morning light    
As you chew the sweet pulp, your eyes lingering      
on my shirtless musculature      
I see the longing reflected in your radiant eyes    
As your gaze rests deliberately on my biceps    
Gently I pull the straps  
of your summer dress down      
releasing your braless peaks    
Your bronzed rose bud tipped mounds  
beckon my mouth    
As you lean into me,  
your ruby fruit lips wrapping around my nipples    
Taking them one at a time you tease me    
With tongue flickering  
across oh so sensitive buds    
I am alive with you  
on this morning of my recreation    
The birds serenade our passion    
your touch making me light as a cloud    
I feel as though floating on waves of pleasure    
The tingling spreads  
from nipples down torso to my pear  
You release me  
and I feel the wind caressing my bare pectorals    
We slowly climb down the ladder    
My eyes follow every sway of your hips    
Till my bare feet touch the earth    
Feeling the moist dirt beneath my soles    
A serious look falls across your face    
I see the midnight desire  
written in the coals of your eyes    
You my beautiful dark haired raven    
Sending shivers down my spine  
  
I know not what the hunger  
in your glowing eyes portends    
But find out as you surrender yourself to my will    
Abandoning any resistance    
As I grasp your arms behind your back    
Pushing you gently toward the tree    
Us alone, no one for you to cry out to    
Though the freedom you must feel as my captive  
Is illustrated when you submit  
to my every demand    
Such sweet bondage you whisper    
I undress you with gentleness of a harem bather      
Your body immobilized  
by the spell of my tenderness    
Skirt unfastened falling in heap    
Your curves exposed to kiss of sunlight    
You worship me with butterfly kisses    
Pressing your lips against mine    
Tongue twining with my tongue    
The perfume of your musk  
filling me with craving    
Your arms wrapped round my waist    
Your fingers pressing into my sacrum  
   
I dangle your dress from a tree bough  
And hold your arms outstretched  
above your head.  
Then you willingly  
slip them into the dress sleeves  
for a taut body pose  
Whose soft gossamer cotton dress fabric  
you could break free if you wanted  
Your stance is compelled by craving  
more than your restraints  
Pulling your arms high above head    
You look like a vestal virgin    
Being sacrificed on the altar of Zeus    
So sacred and special you are    
Your freedom the price you pay    
For ecstasy undreamed of    
Your body stretched taut in the warm breeze    
Feet planted in the moist earth    
Your legs apart, receptive to the gift of my touch  
Me still fully dressed, you naked and vulnerable    
I circle behind you    
My fingers trace a path of pleasure  
across your hips and derriere    
As I stand facing your back    
My woodsman fingernails  
scrape the crevasse of your twin moons    
Pressing into you, my fingertips like feathers tickling your rear passage    
Droplets of your female love juice  
trickle down your inner thighs    
My fingers follow the sensitive valley  
between rear passage and orchid    
Ever so slowly meeting your wet folds    
Tracing your honeyed flower  
and arriving at destination    
The stamen at the apex of your flower    
Like an ebbing ocean tide    
My fingers wash back across your orchid    
Retracing the path and floating off your skin    
Leaving you on fire with desire  
In the quiet my warm breath on your bare back    
I feel your chest rising and falling  
with each blessed breath    
I feel your joy  
as the crystal cool morning air fills you    
with whispered joy to be my slave,      
to sacrifice your virginity to me    
 
With swiftness of lightening    
My hand burns into the soft flesh of your rear    
The sting of the slap paints sparks  
of delight through your hips    
My hand singes your bottom    
As it cracks into you in endless swishes    
The sound echoes, reverberating across my ears    
Your buttocks quiver with delight    
As my hand marks you as my property    
The soreness streaked across your orbs    
My palms crackle harder and harder    
As you begin to whimper like a puppy    
Teardrops streaming down your cheeks    
You whisper your pain  
only exceeded by your pleasure  
The passion play in your bottom  
Outweighs the impulse  
To pull free    
Until the crashes of my hand    
Recede into soft caresses    
 
I kneel behind you    
My lips kiss your moons    
Magnifying your writhe    
Until I can feel your heat of a thousand suns     
I rise rotating around you    
Until I stand hovering in front of you    
You see my fingers reach to my belt    
Unclasping it I pull it swiftly off    
My dungarees fall in a heap at my feet    
Revealing my purple mountain majesty  
in all its glory    
The dark thatch at your crotch looks so inviting    
I long to taste the nectar deep in your canyon    
I want to imbibe your female essence  
until we are one    
I kneel between your legs      
My tongue explores probes  
ever so lightly your outer petals    
Cleaving into you,  
I follow the contours of your flower    
Pressing into the inner petals I thrust into you with delicious strokes    
Lifting through fold to apex of flower    
I delicately nibble the pollen dipped stamen    
Licking the nectar from your bud    
I suck like a kitten on your honeysuckle    
Your moans lead me on    
Until you are thrashing, tugging at your binds    
You bottom no doubt still tingling      
from my stinging hand kisses  
My luscious tongue lashes into you with fury    
Your bud explodes  
into atomic fireballs of sweetness    
Flames cascading against me    
from your tunnel of love    
Sweat pouring down your stomach    
Your love syrup drips from your folds  
down my cheeks  
I rise up like mighty Apollo    
The glisten of your sap on my face    
Reflected in your soft oval eyes    
Even the droplets felt in a handful      
of my raven curls of hair    
My mouth once more joins with yours    
Kissing your deep with furious intensity    
For you to taste your candy juice      
from the mouth which loved you    
Tasting my intimate knowledge of you      
from your dew on my lips    
    
With my touch on your rosy nether petals    
You are overwhelmed by pleasure  
So that you can no longer hold your pose  
And you fall to the ground    
We roll in the wet dirt    
Legs and arms entwined    
I so ready to bless your body  
with the gift of my love    
The mystery of this sacred ritual    
of carnal knowledge    
Making your spine vibrate with awe    
As we share the secret mélange      
of feminine and masculine    
Tasting the forbidden fruit    
complete surrender to natural lust    
Man loving woman    
Devouring each other    
The sacrifice of your virginity completed    
Eros propitiated