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Flash of Lights
in the fringes of my eye I see
shards of light flickering
fluttered about a muddled mind
it's there where I still picture you
twirling as if the days
have not passed by
i linger within these feelings
caressing the cobwebs
strung up from here
to the there
longing for those shining stars
to reach out and in some way
show me how
shards of light flickering
fluttered about a muddled mind
it's there where I still picture you
twirling as if the days
have not passed by
i linger within these feelings
caressing the cobwebs
strung up from here
to the there
longing for those shining stars
to reach out and in some way
show me how
Published 22nd Aug 2022
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22nd Aug 2022 11:08pm
22nd Aug 2022 11:23pm
23rd Aug 2022 1:11am
Hi Tim:)
I so enjoyed how you used the word cobwebs in this.
For me - it emphasizes abandonment. And you waiting
for a sign. Really spellbinding to read.
I so enjoyed how you used the word cobwebs in this.
For me - it emphasizes abandonment. And you waiting
for a sign. Really spellbinding to read.
23rd Aug 2022 2:07am
Anonymous
6th Sep 2022 6:43pm
As delicately woven as always. Simply beautiful Tim
6th Sep 2022 9:41pm
