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13th Aug 2022 5:31pm
Hello there
There’s something about this short piece that just reached me. Maybe because the news of late coming from that side of the Atlantic has been so barren of late. But I think it summarises very eloquently everything, and just leaves it all in a quiet, neat little package.
I guess there’s been a lot of shouting and anger from the world late. This doesn’t do that - it quietly observes, and that’s why I enjoyed it so much.
Thank you for sharing
-M
There’s something about this short piece that just reached me. Maybe because the news of late coming from that side of the Atlantic has been so barren of late. But I think it summarises very eloquently everything, and just leaves it all in a quiet, neat little package.
I guess there’s been a lot of shouting and anger from the world late. This doesn’t do that - it quietly observes, and that’s why I enjoyed it so much.
Thank you for sharing
-M
13th Aug 2022 5:38pm
You’re welcome, and thank you for the kind words. I did my shouting with my other America poem, titled 8/3/22. I hold sadness, anger, happiness and hope in me at all times. I wonder if we are all like that.
