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Everything
maybe we
are just a moment
a blink
of the past
a momentary
everything
secretly holding on
to time as if
it even exists
are just a moment
a blink
of the past
a momentary
everything
secretly holding on
to time as if
it even exists
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Re. Everything
Anonymous
10th Aug 2022 3:59pm
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10th Aug 2022 5:39pm
Re. Everything
10th Aug 2022 4:06pm
It speaks volumes of feelings, association, attachment and past link. I love it. You hold the ocean in a cup.
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
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10th Aug 2022 5:40pm
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10th Aug 2022 5:40pm
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10th Aug 2022 6:02pm
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10th Aug 2022 6:47pm
Re. Everything
10th Aug 2022 5:47pm
So makes me think of a song, "A Life of Illusion", by Joe Walsh and a album title, "Beyond Appearances", by Santana.
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10th Aug 2022 9:52pm
It's so interesting how the past shapes us so much and defines so much of who we are. But then it often feels so far away, like a dream. And in the present is that momentary everything in that instance of time that so quickly becomes the past. And you wonder if time even exists, but those dreams of the future keep telling you it does. That it will get better somehow, I suppose only the future will tell.
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10th Aug 2022 10:13pm
Re. Everything
10th Aug 2022 10:54pm
Dear JC,
Being perfectly honest love confuses me. A lot. As in I’m soooo confused. Your poem, for me, kind of spins it in such a way that the existential of it all can actually be organized. For just a brief moment. I like that. Lovely write. H🌷
Being perfectly honest love confuses me. A lot. As in I’m soooo confused. Your poem, for me, kind of spins it in such a way that the existential of it all can actually be organized. For just a brief moment. I like that. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Everything
10th Aug 2022 11:32pm
Love confuses me too, a lot. It can be so many things and sometimes nothing.
I appreciate your words. You're so lovely ❤
I appreciate your words. You're so lovely ❤
Re. Everything
Nicely contemplative, nicely meditative.
"Everything" ... out of everywhere and into poem.
... 👍
"Everything" ... out of everywhere and into poem.
... 👍
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16th Aug 2022 3:19pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
19th Aug 2022 9:15am
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19th Aug 2022 1:18pm