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Spread me open
I long to know
the raging animal
that you hide
to feel him
come alive
filled with
lust and desire
craving
to be fed
pushing me
against the wall
fingers firmly
around my throat
your teeth
marking my flesh
sliding my panties
to my ankles
spreading me open
filling me completely
screams
fill my lungs
biting
and clawing
at my skin
as the heat
rushes through
our veins
dripping wet
spilling
all over
the raging animal
that you hide
to feel him
come alive
filled with
lust and desire
craving
to be fed
pushing me
against the wall
fingers firmly
around my throat
your teeth
marking my flesh
sliding my panties
to my ankles
spreading me open
filling me completely
screams
fill my lungs
biting
and clawing
at my skin
as the heat
rushes through
our veins
dripping wet
spilling
all over
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Re. Spread me open
25th Jul 2022 2:57am
Hmmm …a little hot :)
Sounds like someone
likes
it a little rough.
Enjoyed the tempo of the write.
Sounds like someone
likes
it a little rough.
Enjoyed the tempo of the write.
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25th Jul 2022 5:40pm
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Re. Spread me open
25th Jul 2022 10:45pm
sure has a look no further...and read title.
erotic ...you have such a way with the erotic.
the imagery of teeth... the thought so so nice.
erotic ...you have such a way with the erotic.
the imagery of teeth... the thought so so nice.
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Re: Re. Spread me open
25th Jul 2022 10:48pm
Re. Spread me open
9th Aug 2022 10:47pm
Love the aggression that you put into your erotic pieces, no kid gloves required, really tight work Lady
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9th Aug 2022 10:54pm
Re. Spread me open
10th Aug 2022 12:38pm
Hi JourneyChase,
How u doing?
This steamy,trembling of knees brilliant!
Gr8t pen.
Take care.
X
How u doing?
This steamy,trembling of knees brilliant!
Gr8t pen.
Take care.
X
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Re: Re. Spread me open
10th Aug 2022 12:49pm
Hey and how are you?
I'm actually sick at the moment but thank you for asking. I'm glad you enjoyed my piece!
Take care
X
Journey
I'm actually sick at the moment but thank you for asking. I'm glad you enjoyed my piece!
Take care
X
Journey
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10th Aug 2022 1:24pm
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
31st Aug 2022 9:19pm
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31st Aug 2022 9:33pm
Ahhh yes perhaps I did. I appreciate you taking the time to explore my work. It's so nice to have you on this journey with me.
xo
xo
Anonymous
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31st Aug 2022 9:43pm
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Re: Re. Spread me open
31st Aug 2022 11:54pm
Yes definitely, that's part of what writing is about, allowing you to fill the spaces inbetween with the thoughts and fantasies that you desire.
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
1st Sep 2022 00:04am
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