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Mission Statement
A poem's dream catcher lattice
Grabs words like flies in a spider's web
And though the juncture lacks status
There is some flow before it's ebb.
But thoughts are tough to snare so well
On such spaced out gossamer nets,
Enchanting, like a witches spell,
In a contest of arcane frets
As when musicians jam all night
In some improvisational mosh
Trying like hell for some delight
In a lyric or two that's posh
And whether or not it nabs a quid
It is how order charms the id.
Grabs words like flies in a spider's web
And though the juncture lacks status
There is some flow before it's ebb.
But thoughts are tough to snare so well
On such spaced out gossamer nets,
Enchanting, like a witches spell,
In a contest of arcane frets
As when musicians jam all night
In some improvisational mosh
Trying like hell for some delight
In a lyric or two that's posh
And whether or not it nabs a quid
It is how order charms the id.
Published 22nd Jul 2022
Author's Note
From September 20th, 2019
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2022 2:17pm
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22nd Jul 2022 2:28pm
Hey, you're in good company because I love sonnets too!
I think of them as heaven's perfect paragraph.
You're right though, they can be a beast tackle at first, but it is doable, and once you get a few good ones in your notebook you may not want to do any other kind of poem.
You really can't go wrong with making a study of the ones Shakespeare and his Elizabethan contemporaries composed.
I very glad you liked it and really appreciate the read and comment!
Many thanks!
I think of them as heaven's perfect paragraph.
You're right though, they can be a beast tackle at first, but it is doable, and once you get a few good ones in your notebook you may not want to do any other kind of poem.
You really can't go wrong with making a study of the ones Shakespeare and his Elizabethan contemporaries composed.
I very glad you liked it and really appreciate the read and comment!
Many thanks!
